Reviews for Pond
Unholy Haven chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Like the second-last one the best, especially "citadel of green".Has a lovely, very satisfying sound to it.
swift sky silver chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
nice imagery there. it puts me in that setting. keep writing 0)
iona-buss chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
Thanking you for reviewing my poem. Very first poem I've ever written so thanks for the help. Just reading 'Ponds' now and it is very interesting it. I agree with the other comment that you have to read it more than once to really appreciate it. But thats with any decent poem anyway. Looking forward to reading the rest of your selection. Thanks again :)
katmonkey chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Excellent work! Well done!

*lime-girl*
Lady of the Moonless Night chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
This is fanstastic. I had to reread it a few times, but that's a good thing. It's excellent work when the reader has to sit there and read it a couple times to fully understand its complete potential. Great work!