|Reviews for I Was Just Going For A Walk|
| The Alien from Uranus chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
That wasn't too bad altogether. The only real problem I see with your work is that you meter appears to be running away from you. It started out fine at first, but later progressed... into something a little less fluid. Still, great theme. Perhaps another try?
Straight from Uranus
| Timothy Hazelo chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
HA! Thats Funny! I hope your Still online!