Reviews for The Vampire Mortamus
Invalid Night chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
This story echo’s Annie Rice’s works, but seems to have it’s own flair to it. One qualm I would have is that when Mortamus started to weep in the first chapter I felt nothing from it, because there wasn’t enough before the paragraph to make to make me feel sorry (or anything for that matter) for him. In any case a solid piece of work, keep it up. :)
Shadowhound chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
This reminds me faintly of Anne Rice, but I guess most vampire stories do after you read one of her books. Keep working on it and do some more chapters.