Reviews for Actaeon
Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
Again, Kira: PLEASE START TO THINK FOR YOURSELF!Okay, Kira, we need to set something straight. I leave the IMAGES for the readers to create. I DO THE WORDS TO GIVE THEM A BASIC PICTURE. MY POETRY IS ABOUT THINKING FOR YOURSELF, NOT ABOUT ME HAVING TO PEN EVERY LITTLE DETAIL INTO A POEM, MAKING IT CRAPPY. Okay, I hope we understand now!
Kira Deleria chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
I think we get the point of The end! but i liked this poem a little. I think you just need to write more about what's happening and who he is and what he does rather than O woe is me for alak alak alak alaka alak...you get the picture ;)
Shadow Lackard chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
Omgosh. I loved this to the extent of my ability to love a poem or book that is not The Mists Of Avalon by Marrion Zimmer
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
Great energy! I waited in bated breath for the end, what sadness!