I thought it was rather extravagant. The flow seemed to match up well to the tie all the missing ends, so you did a fab job. I can only hope you end up being a poet! _ You are awesome!

loserz. ;)

Nice timing with the posting, I have to agree. I like how each stanza has three lines; it works well. I always like the play upon the seasons, relating them to the human mind and our emotions. Good job.

-Sunami Silverblade