Reviews for The Will To Die
CoolVision7888 chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
Azzalli chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
totally empathy here. i love the way you wrote this visually. the constant running and being followed is well portrayed. i love it.

Roaine the Great chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
So ironic, since it's meant to be the will to live. But you captured the whole helpless feeling so well! I loved it. Nice one!
untilI chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Your free verse is amazing and it all flows together smoothly. Great job onthat. In general, this was just really well written and you get the feelings of urgency across very clearly. Keep up the good work. (And I love your Pen name)

~Dream Forever
Meredith chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Thats so good...i wish i could write like u. U should of been showin ur talent a long time ago!
mmmhm chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Great chica keep it up! I need some competition...playin playin
Lynnie-Pooh chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Very powerful. Meaningful and creative. It expresses many feelings. Keep it up.