|Reviews for g e n e s i s|
| evm chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Love it. I like the flourescent lights and reaching out and feeling things that feel so good to be felt and tasting things from far away. It all flows together so well.
| addie pray chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Hell perfected & heaven vanquished...that pretty much describes this. The way you describe things is amazing. I love it. I'm trying to pick out favourite lines but it's all so phantasmic.
| AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
magical. what a life, an illusion. love your words. from the first sentence till the last, it's purely wonderful.
| and flowers chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
| fragglerock chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Wow! This is totally AMAZING! Very vivid and so alive with feeling!
| GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Lovely poem! Great imagery! Wonderful structure. Reminds me of E.E. Cummings. (Which is a very good thing, in my opinion.) It's good to challenge the rules of grammar and mechanics. :) Great poem.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
I am drunk now, these words have such effects... :) Lovely
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
wonderful, wonderful imagery! I have to say the begining is quite humorous and the ending is quite fitting to it.
| Parabolic Logic chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Finally!This was the first thing worthwhile I've read on this site. [I'm a newbie here, but definitely not a newbie to poetry.]Everything else was lacking wordplay and poetic devices altogether; this poem has a feel of "knowing what the rules are then breaking them."At first I wasn't sure what I felt about you not typing "and" out, but it fits with the style pretty well. I'm going to check your other stuff out, you seem worth the while.
| linaeve chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
lovely, nearly-painfully exquisite imagery. interesting unity, with the sake/champagne/wine. brilliantly done.
| Intimate Drowning chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Beautifully written, as always. I adore the ending.
| lackluster chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
you make me fall in love with these writings of yours! wow-wow-wow! mesmerizing...
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
| stuck here waiting chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Beautiful prose, like poetry in it's simplist form. This is great writing, keep it up...