|Reviews for Adonis|
| Shadow Lackard chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
Such wonderful writeing from naught but a middle school? You must be at least a senor in high school? I enjoy your writing so much. If truly you are a middle schooler, your sights run much deeper.
| burnisbetter chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
OMG! You live in NH? No fair! I used to live in Hanover... but then we moved. Anyway, back to the point. This was a beautiful poem which flowed really well and had wonderful imagery. Plus, it's about Greek mythology! What else could I ask for?
| EmpressTiger chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
I like this! Very good job, very lyrical...you did a beautiful job of leaving the mind to picture the story...yet you never lost me once, very good job!
Keep it up!