Reviews for Aegeus
Shadow Lackard chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
this is good! If only it were longer. that is the only fault I see. and that is created by my own greed and want to experience more of your tremendous writing.
Plato's Optic Runaway chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
I like how you use the sails, but I think it would be nice if you expanded the poem a bit more so you didn't have to explain the story behind it for the reader to get something from it.
WickedSilence chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
Although these four lines say much, I think your poem would be improved if you expanded the subject through the addition of two transitional lines. Pretty good overall.