Reviews for Better Together |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Hopefully you can update it soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I doubt that you'll update but I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed the story. Yes, the protagonist is a little cocky and spoiled. But she is fun to read. Amanda's character really makes Alina's character not sound so bad. I like how Ryan doesn't really care what is going on and tries to stay out of it. I can't believe that the two - Alina and Seth don't recognize each other. It was technically Alina's friend that recognized her. I did enjoy this light read. The pranks are hilarious. The guys sound very hot! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg I have fallen in love with the characters! Please update this? you cant just leave it! its amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol my bad , for the review in the next chapter I meant the guy that talked about James, was it Bryce I think, yeah ... :D btw hope you update soon . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha wow I pretty much guessed that Seth was his brother when Jason talked about him, but the question is, was it Seth or James that she kissed? I've got my guess :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you come around to updating this story eventually! it's really entertaining and great so far. I love the characters and dialogue, and i kinda wish there was more to read. great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! This story is so CUTE hahaha I really like it! when are you going to update...update son! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is honestly one of the best stories I have read in a while. Your characters are great, not as two dimensional as some out there and your story line is great. This is really a great story. Thanks for writing it because you brightened up my day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, there arent too many names. After all, a story involves more than just a group of friends. Especially if it's a school war. I cant wait to find out when Seth finds out. Though are u discontinuing this story? It's on a great track |
![]() ![]() OMG! 2 years? I love the plot development in this ... and the way you described the characters gave me more than their looks, it gave a glimpse into personalities, which is better than "she was hot but she didn't think so because she was modest ya know." heheheheh Also love the interplay between the two groups. Even tho I'm TEAM ALINA all the way, I don't really 'hate' the other group no matter how evil those girls are. It's like if it were any other situation they may be friends ... Anyway, write more. You've had a holiday for 2 years so shove that writer's block where it don't shine! ) Fingers crossed |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thats seths brother right? or am i completely confused. I cant be bothered to go through the chapters and check. Anyways i just started reading this story and i love it so far. The pranks are pretty funny but im waiting for something to happen between Alina and Seth...it was so cute when he said he thought he could actually like her. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this story. I know it's been about two years, but please, please, please update this! It is really good and it's left me wanting more, more, more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, very interesting. Update soon I can't wait to find out how Seth knows Jason, and how James plays into all of this, and how Seth reacts when he finds out that Alina is roller coaster girl, and who is James' brother. All very interesting questions, and all answered in due time I suppose. Well this is a great story but unfortunately school calls! Update soon! Adios! ~Fallon |
![]() ![]() ![]() You had better update this story SOON! One and a half years have gone by since you've last updated, but I know you're still alive because you just posted a new story. (Which I love) James is Seth's brother, right? I feel so bad for both of them. They both lost their mother. Aww. I'm definitely putting this story on my sotry alerts and favorites, so please UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i kno i just started to go on this thing recently out of severe boredom in college. my aim is howcoolasn. im me when u can |