Reviews for Better Together
XxStarSdUsTXx chapter 9 . 10/2/2013
I love this story!
Hopefully you can update it soon!
leavemeialone chapter 9 . 4/26/2012
I doubt that you'll update but I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed the story. Yes, the protagonist is a little cocky and spoiled. But she is fun to read. Amanda's character really makes Alina's character not sound so bad. I like how Ryan doesn't really care what is going on and tries to stay out of it. I can't believe that the two - Alina and Seth don't recognize each other. It was technically Alina's friend that recognized her. I did enjoy this light read. The pranks are hilarious. The guys sound very hot! :)
shann-ng chapter 9 . 3/21/2012
Omg I have fallen in love with the characters! Please update this? you cant just leave it! its amazing
jeanBBY chapter 8 . 9/18/2010
Lol my bad , for the review in the next chapter I meant the guy that talked about James, was it Bryce I think, yeah ... :D btw hope you update soon .
jeanBBY chapter 9 . 9/18/2010
Hahaha wow I pretty much guessed that Seth was his brother when Jason talked about him, but the question is, was it Seth or James that she kissed? I've got my guess :D
xoxtina46xox chapter 9 . 4/11/2010
I hope you come around to updating this story eventually! it's really entertaining and great so far. I love the characters and dialogue, and i kinda wish there was more to read. great job!
Writergirl101.WS chapter 9 . 8/22/2008
Hey! This story is so CUTE hahaha I really like it! when are you going to update...update son!
whisperhello chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
Wow, this is honestly one of the best stories I have read in a while. Your characters are great, not as two dimensional as some out there and your story line is great. This is really a great story. Thanks for writing it because you brightened up my day.
Evenstar1389 chapter 9 . 9/1/2007
Hello, there arent too many names. After all, a story involves more than just a group of friends. Especially if it's a school war. I cant wait to find out when Seth finds out. Though are u discontinuing this story? It's on a great track
Essie chapter 9 . 8/8/2007
OMG! 2 years?

I love the plot development in this ... and the way you described the characters gave me more than their looks, it gave a glimpse into personalities, which is better than "she was hot but she didn't think so because she was modest ya know." heheheheh

Also love the interplay between the two groups. Even tho I'm TEAM ALINA all the way, I don't really 'hate' the other group no matter how evil those girls are. It's like if it were any other situation they may be friends ...

Anyway, write more. You've had a holiday for 2 years so shove that writer's block where it don't shine! )

Fingers crossed
victim of reality88 chapter 9 . 7/21/2007
Thats seths brother right? or am i completely confused. I cant be bothered to go through the chapters and check. Anyways i just started reading this story and i love it so far. The pranks are pretty funny but im waiting for something to happen between Alina and was so cute when he said he thought he could actually like her. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
Campiee chapter 9 . 7/15/2007
I just found this story. I know it's been about two years, but please, please, please update this! It is really good and it's left me wanting more, more, more!
FireFallon chapter 9 . 4/20/2007
Interesting, very interesting. Update soon I can't wait to find out how Seth knows Jason, and how James plays into all of this, and how Seth reacts when he finds out that Alina is roller coaster girl, and who is James' brother. All very interesting questions, and all answered in due time I suppose. Well this is a great story but unfortunately school calls! Update soon! Adios!

Dreamless-Wonder chapter 9 . 4/14/2007
You had better update this story SOON! One and a half years have gone by since you've last updated, but I know you're still alive because you just posted a new story. (Which I love) James is Seth's brother, right? I feel so bad for both of them. They both lost their mother. Aww. I'm definitely putting this story on my sotry alerts and favorites, so please UPDATE SOON!
Onion Ring chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
i kno i just started to go on this thing recently out of severe boredom in college. my aim is howcoolasn. im me when u can
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