Reviews for Only a Moment
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
The beginning was strong but I found the last 6 lines didn't really match the rest of it. They sound like more of a start of another poem. *Shrugs* The beginning was amazingly done though!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
interesting.. i kinda took it to be a prostitute...although i dont think thats what it meant