Reviews for She Would Cry Out
LyLTiArApRiNcEsS chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
You're really good at writing songs. Keep it up! Great job.
lackluster chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
the chorus is really powerful! it's really dark, but true i guess. nice piece!

Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
hum! wow. very creative, diff and interesting...
Jadeonai chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
I used to say that my scars and cuts were from my cat...
AllyCred chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
i like it...but i think you should change the last line to "Now she is dead" becoz it kinda leaves a lasting impression and really shows what this has done to the person in the poem...all in all i really liked this well done its beautiful. lots of love ~AllyCred~
Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
Very potent and powerful song here.
loster chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
that song goes above and beyond what i wrote
blackrosestears chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
I like this piece. Really good. Keep it up!
TheBrokenWanderer chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
wow...that's sad...but really i ever got on your fav's list is beyond me...this is better than my stuff...anyway...ya...
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
this is good. I love the chorus and the words. very touching and heartfelt. btw, what happened to you story, "My love for you"? I wanna read the rest of it! lol

Infinity Plus One chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
Holy feck this song really does pull at the heartstrings. Well done for some strong writing.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
powerful & extremely sad...beautifully writen too
queenvixta chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
I can really relate, especially to the chorus. great piece! queenvixta
Vampire's Werewolf chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Whoa. beautifully dark, shows a nice perspective on suicide. thank you for the nice review you left! _ this has perfect (in my opinion) wording. it conveys just the right touch of realism for me, don't know about any one else... but they don't matter! Keep up the great work! THXS!