Reviews for Time
BlackMage44 chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
::O's:: I have story inspiration! The rage of betrayal is well conceived in this poem. I think that was what you were going for... I hope. o_o;; But, this was well written as usual, and your idea was a great one. Keep it up!
Drowned-Rat chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
Great great great! Captures lots of vivid pictures. What really caught my eye was Hazel eyes :D

Such a confusing color, but an otherwise powerful poem :)
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
i can relate... awesomely done
Akhenaten chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
wow, that was a totally awesome poem! I especially liked the last four lines, they were so powerful abd full of regret. Rock on!
account not in use chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Beautifully done. I love the words and emotions.
Calliope Veronica chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
I really like this... especially:

"Behind glaring eyes, I see you watching me."

good job!