|Reviews for manslaughter and a lime margarita|
| Unholy Haven chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
Intriguing and mesmerizing. Love the ending!
| Rozlin chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
wow -smiles like a fool- that was enchanting
| evm chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Haunting. I love: 'the burning stars above los angeles can't save you because what you can't see doesn't exsist. (just like god, yesyes just like him).' Intense love.
| addie pray chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
This was wonderfully vivid. The line you used in the summary was my favourite, along with the last line. Very, very unique, as usual. I love what you write, it's all gritty-gorgeous.
| daisy chain heart chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
eye-opening, original& . 'you looked so beautiful in the blaze of the flames that I can't help but be anything but enamoured'. that line just makes me *wish* I could write like that.
| breakdown in the waiting room chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
Mind-blowingly eloquent, original, daring, and beautiful.
| bjw chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
Fabulous. It's so powerful. I'm lost for words.. Brilliant writing.
| GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
Great imagery. And I love how you put "(thick&heavycannotbreathe) together like that. Illustrates it nicely. Another great poem! No surprise there.
| pneumothorax chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
The idea if great, as is the ending. I love it.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
Powerful emotions here and different aspects of humanity intricately woven.
| my failure chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
i like it. very good.:)
| PorcelainWord chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
Very..awesome... I usually come up with something better to say, but this was just so awesome