|Reviews for Unfinished|
| Cedar L. Arwood chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
the words are your pallette
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
Nice flow and endearing words.
| AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
Holy poetry Batman, that was so cool, I mean there is so much going on its hard to take it all in, so you have to read it a couple of times, but I really dig it. Good Job.
| stuck here waiting chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
Beautifully writtne, amazing imagery...I'm glad you wrote this for FicPress,personally, I enjoyed it thoroughly.
| sempre-e-por-sempre chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
...wow...i loved this...it is so emotional...and so unbelievable..i loved all the imagery...it was wonderful! i loved it! keep writing!