Reviews for Clipped Wings
Nightmare Wolf chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
You are an undeniably beautiful writer. In every sense of the word.
Aryanda chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
*silence in awe of this piece* Wow. this is...amazing, incredible, beautiful, fantastic, and every word of praise that fails my memory right now. This rocks. You rock. *still in awe*
emmathree chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
I'm running out of words to describe your work... phenomenal, amazing, touching.. breath-taking. None of them do your stories any justice.
FrozenKiwi chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
This is a really good story. Excellent work!
quiet-zone chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
How am I supposed to review something as beautiful as that? God.
alligater20 chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
this is beautiful. i am without a doubt that you have a gift, and if you haven't already gotten this published, you should. this story is one of the few things on this site that you can call really good. you mentioned that it didn't have quite the haunting quality that you wanted- well i have a suggestion. at the end you say "i knew, eventually, she would be back." i might be wrong, but to me it seems like el died, and i think to give the story the effect you intended you might want to allude to that fact a little more. maybe re-write the last line. i don't know, that's just a thought. but it's beautiful even if you don't change it at all. keep writing! )