Reviews for The Island
citrus scented chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
oh christ this is quite amazing. sinister and yet sort of ethreal, its very effective. the ending line wraps it up nicely.
FrozenKiwi chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
Absolutely beautiful imagery. Brava.
keito desu chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
Please come back from Squirrel Anna! It better not be an island like this... I'll die if you don't come back! :) I like the rhyming! This is weird but it sort of reminds me of Homer's The Odyssey (scary book! ah... Gitsis)! I don't know why though!
iona-buss chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
wow this is very nice. I especially like the last line the taastes of salt The taste of tears. Very nice. well written :)