Reviews for Walk Me Home
The Postscript chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
beautiful...I absolutly love the ending. I love the line "to feed my soul and feel myself becoming alive", love is like an awakening. wonderful images. A reply you left me on the poem "Fire"-I used to have more love poems on fictionpress, but no one ever reviewed them, so I took them off. I'm not sure if romantic poetry is something I'm good at, I feel like I'm still trying to place my feet on something solid as far as love. Anyway, this was wonderful, every line is so gentle. keep writing. God Bless.
Eirien chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
A beautiful poem, it has such a tender tone and shows the speaker's vulnerability and dependency (in a positive way) on the other person, portrays a sweet, tender love. I like it very much. The "walk me home" somehow brought to mind the book/ film "A Walk to Remember" by Nicholas Sparks - don't know if you know that?
EmpressTiger chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
I really like this piece, nice job! Keep writing!