Reviews for Eye Lock
Bong2 chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
Another EXTRA-ordinary piece. Had me longing for the next line after reading the prior. Great use of words-Hooked me right in 8-)
Trinity Joselyn Carter chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
Wow... that was so amazing. Keep up the good writing!
Ryan Schiff chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
Interesting poem, a bit on the /dark/ side, but very interesting. A lot of nice rhyme, though the rhythm seems to break unintentionaly from time to time.
Danny chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
Slinkygirl chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
absolutely loved it. It's a beautiful poem.
Mike chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
This stuff is really deep. It reminds me of a relationship i once had. Millie u should really send some of your work into competitions. This kind of writing will get you very far.
joquinz chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
thanks for reviewing. this one's nice... sort of haunting. the beginning was really..[i dunno how to explain!] but i dont think the title's appropriate, as in it dint end very well.
Written chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
wow! that was a really cool poem. I love. . . eyes. if that makes any sense. good job on capturing a moment!
jaepoe chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
rhyming structure is good, and great focus on a job