oh

i like this one too

it makes u feel like ur the one in pain

and it realli gives meaning!

and it rhymes

lol

yup

and it make me feel like i neep o help this person who is in pain

okay for another poem

another good one, keep writing.

Love that song!Very good poem thingy!

i would add this to my favs(along with "The Way Out") but i just realized my max. is overboard and i can't...they're both such amazing poems! you're a lovely writer!

i ike this one