Reviews for Former Fatty
SnowLucario chapter 2 . 1/12/2017
Given that this story is done for over 10 years, I'll just say that I hope it's option two.
Lightning Berserker chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
Hey, its been almost 9 years since you last updated. I really like this story, I hope you'd pick this up again.
The-Darkest-Blue chapter 3 . 6/18/2013
I was about to write about how 170 pounds (which is 77kg's) is not big at all, and I would love to be that.. Then I remembered, that this girl was about 5'2 (I think) where as I'm 5'10 and height makes all the difference. So yeah...

No rants from me today, lawl:)

I love this story by the way:) I hate when girls get upset when someone says gain/loose five pounds, because it's really a small amount where I'm from...ok no more random tangents I promise:D

Yes, I'm random:)
Lightning Berserker chapter 7 . 6/1/2013
Good story, I like it.
lizzi chapter 7 . 4/1/2013
update please! :(
Guest chapter 7 . 12/14/2012
could have been a better story ,you know, andrea seems fickle not innocent.
Bag Over My Head chapter 7 . 7/16/2012
This story was fine until I read chapters six and seven. The story just goes off the rails at that point. It should have focused on the girl's difficulty coping with how differently people react to her. The realization that she's the same person and that only her body has changed makes the superficiality of most people's thinking glaringly obvious. I think dealing with the aftermath of weight loss can be just as psychologically difficult as dealing with the aftermath of weight gain. A pity this story did not stay focused on that. The first five chapters are fine. No law against deleting six and seven and trying again.
Smartgirl94 chapter 7 . 11/28/2011
This is really good and I hope you update soon it's been 6 years. Please update soon :D
selahandsong chapter 7 . 2/20/2011
Wonderful story! I've got to say, it's one of my favorites; I couldn't stop reading. What I'm really concerned with is how Andrea isn't "herself" anymore. I mean...I know she's still herself and all in the story, but I feel as if her character changed you know? I was thinking how she doesn't notice or realize these changes happening around her since her weight-loss. I was hoping she'd still have the same perspective as the "fat girl." That's just me of course. I really do love everything else! Great plot line and great characters. I'm really hoping for more!

Keep it up!
AlyssaVir chapter 7 . 11/27/2010
Really Great story :D. you should write more! lol in the beginning I think you said Danielle's name instead of Andrea's when The teacher said that he was going to give her a ride. But other than that this is a pretty good story .. :D!
the.writer.hannah chapter 2 . 9/10/2010
her dads a jackass!
InTiMaTeLoVeRfOrEvEr chapter 7 . 9/8/2010
Hot damn... I wanna see more! Write more!
the rational hedgehog chapter 7 . 2/14/2010
Haii~! I must say, I was very happy to see this story. You usually don't find many like these around here. It's mostly just romance.

Andrea and the others are believable characters. I especially liked Dmitri and Max. It was interestng reading about the various reactions people had before and after she lost weight. I also like how Andrea's beautiful but she doesn't know it.

I found a typo- "I’m going to call a cab for you, Arthur, and then I’m going to drive Danielle home." I think you meant Andrea? :D

An awesome chapter, please update soon! :D
please chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
PLEASE WILL YOU UPLOAD THIS?

i mean, its really good so far, so please finish this story
LittlemissPatty chapter 7 . 8/26/2009
It's been a while since you've updated. I hope you do update soon. I really want to know what happens soon. I want Max and Andrea together. :D
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