Reviews for Former Fatty
Vacant Red chapter 7 . 6/9/2009
4 years passed and not an update...

well its okay

i guess i can live but the curiosity is eating me alive and i want a happy ending :]
CrazyInAGoodWay chapter 7 . 5/17/2009
i dont know if you know this but its been 7 1/2 months since uve updated... and i really want you to update more... ya so... um... UPDATE
sw448 chapter 7 . 4/19/2009

this is good. I want to know what happens next

i actually liked the dan/Andrea dynamic till he went all creepy. D

Miz Calixte chapter 7 . 4/8/2009
so you going to finish this story anytime soon? Because you went and did a cliffy on me!


I'm sad now.

Its a good story! i want to know what happens!

Pwease finish it?

Miz Calixte
Bonedigger chapter 7 . 3/25/2009
I like this story a lot, and it's quite true to life. Doesn't matter if you used to be fat, or you used to be the geek, or you used to be flat chested, guys forget that they used to pick on you. I didn't read chapter 7 before it was rewritten but I think I prefer it without the rape. A lot of authors try to make their stories more dramatic by throwing in rape, and it just trivialises it. I think you made a good decision taking it out. I'll be waiting on more chapters x
bleuskies chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
I like your story a lot :) But it started to get a little strange like at the 6th chapter and it kinda made me not really wanna read the rest I mean I really love the beginning when she went to camp and I totally thought she would be with Dimitri XD I was wrong! I love how she was still young in the beginning but when she was more mature in the end it was this is so hard to explain lol but your writing was terrific :) Keep on the good work

~Yo Fav Writer Lol: Michi XP
sarcasm is my middle name chapter 7 . 2/7/2009
wow, she has been getting a lot of bad attention!

Thanks for the story!

by the way, does phil actually like andrea for herself or for her body?
hydora chapter 7 . 12/23/2008
er...the whole "Dan" incident was freaky 0_0

thank god he didn't rape her.
Kimera77 chapter 7 . 12/11/2008
Great development! Didn't expect that! Keep it up!
MyDecoy chapter 7 . 11/8/2008
I loved reading this so far,

fantastic writer P
justdazed chapter 7 . 10/31/2008
aww...max is sweet

please mae Andy fall for Max though...not Phil

please update!
Silent Grenade chapter 7 . 10/29/2008
SoulSam chapter 7 . 9/16/2008
this has got to be one of my all time favourite fics. i loved every chapter and i can't believe there's only 7! :(

i'm dying to read more, and i know it's a long shot since it's been almost 3 years since you've updated, but please please please don't abandon this story! it is too good a fic to not finish...i'd really love to see how this continues, and how max and andrea's relationship progresses into somethine more than friendship. update soon? i'm ever so hopeful! lol
zomgnessa chapter 7 . 9/8/2008
aww this is so adorable

max should just tell andrea how she feels

update ASAP!
Valiant Valkyrie chapter 7 . 8/26/2008
So, I see you haven't been poking around this story for a while, but I wanted to tell you that I did like the tone and nature of the story. This last chapter doesn't seem to fit with the rest of it, though. And at one point Andrea is called Danielle, and the principal calls Max Mr. Wilson. But besides all that, I really wish you pick up this story again!
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