Reviews for Former Fatty
pandorka42 chapter 7 . 8/26/2008
This is really good! You should definitely keep going with what you have. But, if this is as far as you feel the motivation to go, then I enjoyed the read. :)
Unknowingly lost chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
Woo! This is an awesome story! That must have been so hard for Andrea. Please update because you are an amazing author to be able to capture the realism in the world. Thank you.
Unknowingly lost chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
I almost cried in this chapter! This is a great story so far and I've only read the first chapter. Andrea is so cool and everyone is so mean to her! Please update!
Shannon chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
Okay, so I don't have an account on here, but I HAVE to review this AMAZING story.

I just started reading it maybe two hours ago and I must tell you: I'm in love. If you actually had this published, I'd go out and buy it. (Of course, I'd have to have money. lol)

This story is just so... real. Realistic, I guess, is the word I'm looking for. Andrea's emotions throughout this entire piece have been incredibly... erm, accurate. I can think of the word, but... wait, no. Her emotions have been dead-on. I, myself, struggle with weight issues and the beginning of this story portrayed exactly some of my thoughts and feelings. (Although I wouldn't be caught dead hanging out with someone so catty as Danielle. Ugh.)

And Max is amazing, and the way you write Sam and Lucas' characters makes me want older brothers. :P

I really hope you choose to continue this, because it's such a fantastic story and it really does read like a novel. ]
Hateful Loving chapter 7 . 7/30/2008
this is really really really good. I would put more really's but then the review you would be really long. lol anyways i know you havent updated in ages but im hoping you'll start too please

Allie92 chapter 7 . 4/23/2008
just like to say that i really like this story and was just hoping you could update soon cause i want to read more and this no a flame or anything but i just kind of thought that the harrasment thing was little blown up update soon
dontneedyou chapter 7 . 3/7/2008
I like this story. :)
bridgette261 chapter 7 . 1/20/2008
I really like your story. Minimal grammatical errors, a lot of gradual changes in the characters...good stuff. :) Please update soon?

toazdo chapter 7 . 1/20/2008
I love this story! I'm sick of reading stories about people losing weight and suddenly changing who they were before just coz they look different now. I love how Andrea's still herself even now after the weight loss.

I might be biased since I love Max but I think there's something wrong with Phil. He's way too nice and he's also not Max )

Can't wait till your next update!
Not Who I Look Like chapter 7 . 1/20/2008
this is really good! Update soon!
Dallikins chapter 7 . 12/15/2007
Ive loved the story thusfar. However, it seems, to myself and im sure to others, that it has been left unfinished. I'd love to see more chapters, but im sure you have a busy life, so if not, ill live.
Dance Floor Rookie chapter 7 . 12/10/2007
I really enjoy reading this story. Probably because I was a fat girl, got skinny, and found it just made my life that much harder. Unfortunitly I didnt have a cute guy-friend like Max. D But then again I also didn't have fake friend like Danielle.

I don't relate to Andrea much beyond the whole once fat thing but I still enjoy reading a story about how a character dealt with a similar problem.

Thanks for killing 40 minutes of my life with a cool read.

Serratia chapter 7 . 10/15/2007
Waahh! Where's chapter eight? Please update soon... I really like your storyD
Serratia chapter 2 . 10/15/2007
Woah! Cool Story! I love itD I hope you'll update soon!D
CreativeArts chapter 7 . 9/1/2007
This is the best story I've seen on this site. This has been said, but Andrea is a very likable character because she has a realistic level on confidence. I also appreciate the fact that you have an impressive amount of reviews, yet you're not big-headed about it. In most stories I read with a very large number of reviews, the author notes by each chapter are something along the lines of "OMG I got soo many reviews for the last chapter! *Gives you all cookies". When I read author notes like that, I thank the lord that the story is good because I'm definitely not reading it for the author. But this, the fact that you are a level-headed and intelligent author from what I can tell from your notes makes the story even more enojoyable.

It's unfortunate that the last update was so long ago because it gives us little hope that it will be continued any time soon-but by chance you get around to reading this, please know that this story is excellent and I'm sure many readers will be happy f you continued. By the dates of recent reviews, I'm sure the readers have stuck around.
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