Reviews for Against the Rain
Lady Hoshi chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
I could feel you waiting out in the rain, and even the rain crying for you. This was well written and very sad.
kody chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
The poem sure did get better as you continued it and made it longer. Sorry that your boyfriend didn't come! :( -Kody
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
aw poor thing. I sorry that happened. But this is really good and emotional. love the work! *hugs*

Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
title goes really well, i like that about it. nicely done
justaghost chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
Personally I think boyfriends are a waste of time, they never mean a word they say. Unless that's just the experience I've had.

The poem was good though, and the feeling was light but it was still there. Great job.
crusoeing chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
That's a very sweet poem. I like the whole rain metaphor.