I could feel you waiting out in the rain, and even the rain crying for you. This was well written and very sad.

The poem sure did get better as you continued it and made it longer. Sorry that your boyfriend didn't come! :( -Kody

aw poor thing. I sorry that happened. But this is really good and emotional. love the work! *hugs*

Sorrow

title goes really well, i like that about it. nicely done

Personally I think boyfriends are a waste of time, they never mean a word they say. Unless that's just the experience I've had.

The poem was good though, and the feeling was light but it was still there. Great job.

That's a very sweet poem. I like the whole rain metaphor.