|Reviews for A Breath of Fresh Rain|
| a.reading.whore chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
In this poem you language is more saxon, less latinate and..syllable-ridden. Don't get me wrong, I love syllables and you use them flawlessly. But in this, the language is more..earthy. Its quite convincing... line breaks, too.
| Jadeonai chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
I like it.