Reviews for Decidedly Untitled
a.reading.whore chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
This is beautiful. Your sounds, the words you chose are very well-fitting. I really liked your beginning, "And these pieces" then how you followed up with "slowly peeling off." I don't know it the assonance is intentional or not, but its very effective, and it keeps recurring throughout the poem. Nice piece of language, "as you tear the scales off my eyes/ and heal them with tears."Good job.