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Not bad.

I was wondering when you're going to update?

This is really intersting, I really like your writing style. I don't have any critcism actually . . . (I know, that's helpful.) This story vaguely reminds me of "God bless you Mr. Rosewater" by kurt vonnegut.

I don't know. This was a bit repetitive of the first chapter- but we do learn a bit more.

Nice first chapter. The writing was short and choppy- normally a turnoff- but it is simply this story's style. Can't wait to read more.

Wow, that's really not something you should read at night on your own. I think my brain exploded.

But it was amazing anyway. And I should add that I'm not as dumb as I sound there, just tired. And a little stunned, because this truly was brilliant, and original.

Your writing style is excellent. Maybewhen I do a story on here you can giveme a few pointers

this intresting gonna so how it goes yeah

I really enjoyed this, the style of it, as well as the beautiful simplicity of the fact that the only names we learn, are those of people who don't play major roles in the story.

I too enjoy the style, it reminds me a bit of an author named Francesca Lia Block in it's bluntness and humanity. It would be nice if we could have a little more history of the main character soon though, as to better understand her thought processes.

your style reminds me of that of the author of 'fight club'. entrancing and blunt.

i am madly in love, to use a cliche, with your style. MADLY IN LOVE. it's so harsh but human all at once, and it's cutting and colloquial while poetic and ... it defies description, i guess.

"And while she is crying at me in my office I wonder how I am going to masturbate over her when I can see a boyfriend in the picture."

i guess those lines illustrate your style very well. or maybe i just liked them because they're so...human. yeah.

i like it. i love how you write. it makes me laugh. because i can so see it actually happening... & relate to it. haha. sgood. write more! )

Wow. You have a really unique sense of writing, keep up the great work.