Reviews for Renewal
Badger250 chapter 6 . 8/9/2005
You keep building the tension up and, even though you're doing a good job, it irritates me. I dancing in my chair wondering whats going to happen.
Safekht chapter 6 . 8/9/2005
You completely deserve to feel special! I should sit down one night when the rest of my family is asleep and just read this straight through. I would do that tonight except I got my friend's Sweet 16 to go to tomarrow. I completely love this series! At least I think it's a series... I hope I think so, anyway...

I can't exactly say cliffhangers are evil, since I use them myself, but there's a difference between cruel and evil. Now you got me waiting til the next chapter! Uhh... Yeah!
MB chapter 6 . 8/9/2005
Okay...I hope that niece comes in to 'help'.you know what... her boyfriend should just be playing dead and really be a vamp. :p .. even though that's not possible
Winter chapter 6 . 8/9/2005
YAY! I get shameless plugs! WOOT!

"She was tired. She was cranky. She was bruised. She wanted to take a nap. And woe to those who stood in her way." Sounds like you after soccer practice, lol.

Great chapter... Marcus is becoming an interesting figure.
Safekht chapter 5 . 8/8/2005
Wow. This is the kind of stuff that seperates the rookie, unpublished writers *coughmecough* from the awesome-esque writers that you hear about making $84758456482965 off of one book. The kind of stuff where (if it was long enough) that you could lock yourself in your room in and read 200 pages without worrying about... well, the real world.

This, my friend, is awesome.
MB chapter 5 . 8/6/2005
Do I know of this Marcus person? Or is he a new character?Hmm.. as always, very nice. Now that we have felt the pain of 'training' (as in soccer) you can write about it with so much more vivid imagery! Woot for you!
WinterTears chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
OK, I need help...

What year is all this going on, cause I'm writing Andris and Cath's bit, and I need a bit of help, cause I don't want these stories to clash.

I need to know if my story should be set in the 70's or 80's or are we assuming this is in the future... how old would you say the twins are during this? Any ideas are needed soon!
WinterTears chapter 5 . 8/6/2005
Leeches like Marcus give us all a bad name...
WinterTears chapter 4 . 8/5/2005
YAY! We got mentioned... oh, and heads up, I'm writing Andris and Cath's story...
WinterTears chapter 3 . 8/5/2005
Hehehehe...

Ali's back. How fun. Do the twins make another appearance as well? We should stir things up a bit, dontcha think?
somethingsup chapter 4 . 7/25/2005
Like it, like it, LIKE IT!

lol Needless to say, I really like this. o
Safekht chapter 4 . 7/18/2005
*happy squeal* I love it! It's just like candy! Very, very good candy. Chocolate-and-sugar-covered strawberries. Hmm... I'm hungry now. X)
justmica chapter 4 . 7/16/2005
Yay! An update! I love this story and its characters so far. I'll have to read the prequel to this someday...:D
MB chapter 4 . 7/16/2005
YAY! Gata is back! For the moment anyway.

So.. Ali becomes a teacher.. oh, dear.. I hope he doesn't sign up at our school.. though, it might be fun. In a painful sort of way.
justmica chapter 3 . 7/9/2005
Dude, I'm seriously into this story. Can't wait until the next update! :D
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