Reviews for The Story of Life
Jesse the Storyteller chapter 3 . 11/26/2005
Very sad, very mournful - I do eblieve that is the point. The repitition really adds to the poem. Pretty decent poem you have here ;)
Jesse the Storyteller chapter 2 . 11/26/2005
Interesting, especially the last line. Your poems flow together really well almost as if poetry is your mother tongue :P
Jesse the Storyteller chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
Interesting pictures and imagery here... I like the last line.
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
oh my god, this is actually AMAZING... such a vivid image, i swear, it's so fucking powerful... beautiful.
Cloud Burst chapter 5 . 8/28/2005
very uplifting and inspiring ) beautiful work!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 4 . 8/19/2005
What a beautiful and satisfying closing after all the turmoil and incessant thought.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 3 . 8/19/2005
The italics is haunting.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 2 . 8/19/2005
I love the style with the passion and the beauty.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
Cloud Burst chapter 4 . 8/16/2005
i like the ending line of this poem, very strong. brilliant!
Cloud Burst chapter 3 . 8/16/2005
whoa that is just breathtaking! such intense imagery - i truly love it!
Cloud Burst chapter 2 . 8/16/2005
sounds sorta like a prayer/hymn. beautiful imagery - i luv sapphires -
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
i just learned a new word today! - scryer. lol! no seriously. anyways really awesome, short but awesome!
youzi chapter 4 . 8/14/2005
you really have a knack of coming up with wonderful titles to hold your pieces together! i really liked the idea of this piece..
youzi chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
intriguing...especially the way you've titled this D
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