|Reviews for Shatter|
| Needa S chapter 2 . 3/28/2006
Sad, but a lot of people are that way. Nicely done.
| Needa S chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
Cool, awesome write.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
If Thou would kiss me all time soon would stop,—
I could not contemplate upon world's care,
If Thy sweet lips in touch enjoined with mine,—
If Thou would whisper caring words softly,—
I could not listen to nightingale's song,
If Thy soft breath fell gently on my ears,—
If Thou would touch me with silken caress,—
I could not feel hot sun warming my skin,
If Thy smooth fingers wandered through my hair,—
If Thou would hold me in heaven's embrace,—
I could not sense wide sky's bright blue expanse,
If Thou would cup me in Thy tenderness,—
O woman of my deepest dream's desire,—
¿Why can't Thou realize that Love blinds me,—
And I a pauper at Thy feet do kneel?
| Joey7691 chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
I think it could go for longer, expressing emotions in a deeper way, but it certainly holds promise and certainly gets the main point across.
| KonekOniko chapter 2 . 7/25/2005
Wonderful & sad, once again. Though, I prefer the first. Either way, they were beautiful.
| KonekOniko chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
That was sad...but sadly...some people are just so...fragile. Wonderful poem...
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 2 . 7/18/2005
i like the tear being there. good job!
| dusk orchid chapter 2 . 7/13/2005
Like a sharp edge of emotion breaking the heart...
| dusk orchid chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
Stunning in its fragility.
| HauntedMisery chapter 2 . 7/11/2005
Wow, amazing work, very awesome job...
| Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
Very good and short. It would be great if you could extend it I would love to see how it turns out!
| arcane devices chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
short but chilling. nice, keep writing. -ADD
| free-to-dream15 chapter 2 . 7/10/2005
Wow! I like how this is so short, but it gets a very true message across. Great job!
| A Face Worth Remembering chapter 2 . 7/10/2005
Wow. So true.
| godsandstars chapter 2 . 7/10/2005
hm this is so much like the last one that the feeling seems forced. but i still love chapter one XDD