Reviews for Racing Time
RougePrincess chapter 13 . 1/1/2006
Good so you need to describe the setting a little more .It is really intesting how you keep jumping around ,but make sure that the reader knows that you have moveto an other setting
Abby Sequioa chapter 13 . 11/7/2005
OH MY FREAKING GOSH! SHE UP-DATED! *clasps hands over cheeks in awe* anyway, nice twist, you'd better get the next chapter up sooner or I shall quit reading your story in protest.
Jay-Ling chapter 13 . 11/7/2005
(logged out)


*dances around house singing 'u updated'*
Pure Autumn chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
This is really good continue ...
InspirASIAN chapter 12 . 10/13/2005
i swear if u dont update i'll kill u
Abby Sequioa chapter 12 . 10/3/2005
OH MY GOD *sorry God* SHE UP-DATED... WOW *stares in awe at her computer* WOW anyway good chapter but watch the run-ons like: ""I was laughing at Zack for even attempting to catch up with me and Saber saw the fence and jumped it just like we always do but I wasn’t holding on very tight with my legs and fell off.”"
Abby Sequioa chapter 11 . 8/15/2005
ok I up dated High School now UPDATE THIS! NOW! *holds sock up threatenly* NOW!
Abby Sequioa chapter 8 . 8/15/2005
um... I'm re-reading everything and like the conections between Pipper and Ryan and Pipper and Saber... they came too fast... it's kind of confusing... and why does Pipper so instantly HATE Zack? anyways its a good story line and everything...
Princess-anna57 chapter 11 . 8/5/2005
Keep the chapters coming Jo! _

InspirASIAN chapter 11 . 8/1/2005
that sucks, i wouldn't want that 2 happen.
perdita's kiss chapter 11 . 7/30/2005
this is pretty cool. I like it. ok, well, update soon, can't wait!

Smart Mouth
Princess-anna57 chapter 9 . 7/29/2005
Hey Jo, this is really cool! _ Keep writing this, I like! _
InspirASIAN chapter 9 . 7/29/2005
eh? thats it? oo...i know where this is going...oh, du u think ma-b u could re-review Girl In the Black Kimono? I had to remove and repost

LYLAS keep writing!
InspirASIAN chapter 6 . 7/5/2005
o...what next?
Princess-anna57 chapter 6 . 7/4/2005
YAY! You updated! I really love the way this story is turning out. Keep it up!

Love you lots, always and forever, Anna! -xoxo-
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