Reviews for Sky Blade
in theory chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
You're right about the flow, unfortunately it's not so lubricated. But your metaphors are really fantastic! I loved this. Great job :)
syrai chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Man, I love your poems. They're so damn beautiful.
fearphobic chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
i thought it was really well written...beautiful piece actually...keep writing!
ambiguityy chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
powerful description... I can feel the thunder roar its war cry deep and hollow, resonating across the sky. Lightning a screaming whip that lashes through the cavalry of clouds, startling everything in its wake. Rain hammering down hard like an advancing army, cold and furious. Really great poem.
smile persephone chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
It shouldn't flow, thunderstorms and armies don't flow-it's sporadic. Despite the fact that I've seen this metaphor countless times, you tell it well. Nicely done.
Thornberry chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
Nonsence, this flows fine. Very nice. I love your use of metaphor. I envy ur poetry skills...lol
Ryter chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
I am Ryter! And Ryter is me!

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHHA! FEAR THE POWER OF THE SPORK!

And I say, that this is good.

Zoink!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
I like it, esp. the imagery.
DathomiranSciFiAuthor chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
*grins* Lovely description as always. And cool symbolism.
shadowedstar213 chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Interesting thoughts. I envy your amazing talents.
MIDNIGHT-PIXIE chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
i like it-it works-war and storms don't flow-so it really works well-i loved it-great job...