|Reviews for Sky Blade|
| in theory chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
You're right about the flow, unfortunately it's not so lubricated. But your metaphors are really fantastic! I loved this. Great job :)
| syrai chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Man, I love your poems. They're so damn beautiful.
| fearphobic chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
i thought it was really well written...beautiful piece actually...keep writing!
| ambiguityy chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
powerful description... I can feel the thunder roar its war cry deep and hollow, resonating across the sky. Lightning a screaming whip that lashes through the cavalry of clouds, startling everything in its wake. Rain hammering down hard like an advancing army, cold and furious. Really great poem.
| smile persephone chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
It shouldn't flow, thunderstorms and armies don't flow-it's sporadic. Despite the fact that I've seen this metaphor countless times, you tell it well. Nicely done.
| Thornberry chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
Nonsence, this flows fine. Very nice. I love your use of metaphor. I envy ur poetry skills...lol
| Ryter chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
I am Ryter! And Ryter is me!
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHHA! FEAR THE POWER OF THE SPORK!
And I say, that this is good.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
I like it, esp. the imagery.
| DathomiranSciFiAuthor chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
*grins* Lovely description as always. And cool symbolism.
| shadowedstar213 chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Interesting thoughts. I envy your amazing talents.
| MIDNIGHT-PIXIE chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
i like it-it works-war and storms don't flow-so it really works well-i loved it-great job...