Reviews for Why?
Kira Deleria chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
I'm suprised i actually liked this poem. My friend read it just now and said i dont really see the point, but at the moment i disagree. You poem tells exactally what happend and what will happen. I like the I shall at the end because its her finally overcoming it and standing on her two feet again. I do think that the reason why she was confussed was because she didn't read your explination and that's another thing, you have to not realy on your explination to give the poem its true meaning. I still like it afterall, but if you really need it to be exactally that and not leave it to the reader's imagination try to stick it in the title somehow or slip it into the pome. Very nice work on this one.
lonelytourist chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
very powerful lots of emotion i really like it and can relate great job

Aithwayth chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
A little quick paced but really good on the emotion.

Good job here with it. Keep it up!