this is an absolutely brilliant story. i love it! there's really nothing else to say because it's so good :) cya later ~ luv Alenor.

This story completely rocks! I love it so much. All the characters were awesome the story was awesome and just great work! Keep writing!

that was an AWESOME story. I really liked Carlies brothers and Vincent. For some reason i imagine Vincent as a really hot guy o.o. Other then that the story was once again just really good, aybe i could see a movie like that in the future? D

hey,hi um if u are going 2 fix da mistakes u need to fix all da 'his' i think wot u mean inmost places is 'he's' if u8 get wot i mean but apart from dat i fink itz a pretty gud story more den wot i can do ;)

aw. th was so CUTE. ur a gr8 writer. u know. nd i hope you definitely post this new story up soon.

~*~respect~*~

omg no!. How can Jake be gay?

haha. charlie's bros r funny

i heart Simple Plan. Yah. best concrt eva

~*~respect m8~*~

Please continue to write. I love the entire idea of this story. You have several touching and beautifully written scenes. You probably should consider "cleaning it up a bit". Just a little sentence reconstruction and some grammar corrections. Your strongest and most important part of this story was character development. I found myself wishing Charlie was my best friend. Love your story. Please write soon. Thanks for sharing, Jool

this really was a great story

grammer overlooked, i think it was a wonderful piece of ficiton

U have lots of grammar mistakes. You should check these chapters again and fix the errors

Oh man, this is so cool...i read this whole story within a day. i absolutely love this story. and this stiry's filled with so many hunks! Lol...keep writing...

this is so good will there be a sequel

"Lying silently on the bed, listening to the gentle music humming through the air. A photo album flipped open before."[try changing that to "i was lying silently..". don't start with a fragment of a sentence]

"A photo album flipped open before."[a photo album was flipped open before me.]

"Our mother didn’t mind as long as it got turned down at six when we had dinner."[...as long as it "was" turned down...]

"It was something we liked to do all the time, a family thing."["it was a family thing we did all the time". there is no need to say "liked" because if simply saying that it's a family thing signifies that they like doing it]

there are more but i don't have the time right now to review properly.

you may want to shorten the first paragraph. e.g. "see my dad's a professor..." could be the start of a new paragraph, and the descriptions of the siblings be made another paragraph.

you have a good idea for this piece of fiction, but you need to do something about the spelling errors and review some sentence structures. maybe do some editing and repost this?

overall, this is interesting. keep writing!

SO, when are you starting a new story... I can't wait! THanks

So, are you going to write another story. Maybe a sequel to this one? Or not... but I keep looking for any updates or new stories... please!