Reviews for Militia |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ohh a trilogy, how interesting! miltia was jealous, how cute. update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome update. sad about her mom. but now they have one necklace! i dunno if this will play a part but it was kinda stupid of them to leave that piece of paper there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've really enjoyed the story so far. I'm also happy to hear it will be a trilogy. All I can say is keep up the good work and keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() man all that stuff in your a/n just went right over my head. if i ever get confused i'll come back and read it though. so i finally read the revised stuff. and i like it. i'm in complete shock at the ending... for some reason i didnt see that coming. i love zane, i hope you develop him more. i liked the part with the teacher yelling about how they were supposed to be enemies. comical. well ihope you continue to update... both stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ack, i feel awful. sorry it took me so damn long to read this. there are changes here, aren't there? or maybe it's just been so long that i forget. but i'm sure that last line wasn't there before, quite an impact it made too. it's very rare that i read/like these kinds of stories- i'm usually strictly a straight laced romance/humour kind of reader, although there are always exceptions. and this is one of those exceptions. i don't know why other people aren't reviewing you. if i can read this out of my element and love it... i assume other people would love it as well, if they read it. i really hope you continue with the story. it intrigues me muchly. you should keep going with or without reviewers. they will come eventually, believe me. i went chapters with no reviews for njas at one point, quite discouraging it was, as much as i love the story. but now i'm happy with my handful of regular reviewers (including you). please keep writing this story! at least i'm reading it, right? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you are going to write this full-length :) |