|Reviews for Remember Me?|
| Formerly chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
Your rhymes sound way too forced and self-conscious.
| Spawn2099 chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
Wow, that was actually pretty good. I don't read poetry much, but I thought this was good. Nice rhyming and such, I've always had a hard time making rhymes in my poems.
| Mbwun chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
Nice and bitter, perhaps appropriately so. Borders on the edge of nursing a chip on the shoulder or holding a pointless grudge, but the ending saves it. Not the best poem I've read on this site; it could stand some cleanup and a little less use of cliches. However, it's certainly not the worst, either. A solid effort.
He Who Walks On All Fours
| Faithiny chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Wow. I love the tone, the voice, everything about this poem is superb. The last stanza is wonderful too. Brings a great close to a great piece of art. Keep going!
| Thorn's-girl chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
OMG this is freakin powerful. I can honestly think of nothing with this much emotion that I have seen recently, and applaud you. *claps* This is brilliant. My mind is churning furiously. I love stuff that makes me think.