Reviews for Tainted MariĆ”
Rob Roy '03 chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
Crushing visual; excellent work. Stupendous job, and brilliant parallel of .
breakdown in the waiting room chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
Yeah, I got it without the explanation. My mouth was slightly hung open, very forceful. Gorgeous imagery, nice knowledge of Catholicism there. I agree with your ideas. I think it could have been stronger in places if you had used emphasis such as italics or bolding or even caps. But you express your thoughts wonderfully, excellent ideas put into words, someone needed to say this, and with this metaphor. -jess
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
I dont really like religion so this was really good, i really really liked it. If i have ne space in mi fav stories list im adding it, coz it is just so so good...almost perfect. kEEP IT UP _
Will German chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
this is really interesting, and im not entirely sure what ur saying but i like the changing perspective and views, good job, i will read more closely...will