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sarah1491 chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
You can kinda tell you rushed a bit on this poem, as it isn't as unique as most of the ones you write. I still really love all of your poems though! :)
MadLassWithKerosene chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
WOW i love it to death. going on my favorites list. i think most anyone can relate to this at sometime in their lives.. like me right now. :sigh: theres nothing like being in middle school. haha.

gooey chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
*claps* that was awesome! congrats! I especially liked the "I want to be able to not want anymore. And just be happy." I like that. It's true and harsh. nice job!

Unholy Haven chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
I can really relate to this one. Very honest.

I did find the short sentences a little abrupt, though.

Your style is so very easy to read. Each poem, from beginning to end, is readily absorbed, and manages to captivate the interest and the emotions.
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
I liked the fact that you have poured out your feelings. It was a pleasure reading that piece. :)

fragglerock chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Wow! This is a really AWESOME piece! Keep writing!
spacehikariangel chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
i like it. it expresses several feelings which in a sense are one feeling...the title everything really works;)