|Reviews for Everything|
| sarah1491 chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
You can kinda tell you rushed a bit on this poem, as it isn't as unique as most of the ones you write. I still really love all of your poems though! :)
| MadLassWithKerosene chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
WOW i love it to death. going on my favorites list. i think most anyone can relate to this at sometime in their lives.. like me right now. :sigh: theres nothing like being in middle school. haha.
| gooey chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
*claps* that was awesome! congrats! I especially liked the "I want to be able to not want anymore. And just be happy." I like that. It's true and harsh. nice job!
| Unholy Haven chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
I can really relate to this one. Very honest.
I did find the short sentences a little abrupt, though.
Your style is so very easy to read. Each poem, from beginning to end, is readily absorbed, and manages to captivate the interest and the emotions.
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
I liked the fact that you have poured out your feelings. It was a pleasure reading that piece. :)
| fragglerock chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Wow! This is a really AWESOME piece! Keep writing!
| spacehikariangel chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
i like it. it expresses several feelings which in a sense are one feeling...the title everything really works;)