Reviews for The Chosen Ones
perpetual Audio chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
very good my friend, the repitition with "his chosen ones" helps it attach itself to your a very powerful poem allround. this gives off the image of "the final day" as i would call it. the final day for all christians...judgemnt day..
Gijinka Renamon chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Not bad, not bad at all. Me likey. And it kinda reminds me of my own poem.

And I never really thought about "what if the person who spilled the beans on Anne Frank and the others had a good reason".

I guess we'll never know...
Moonbeam Elegance chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
words are brilliant put together,it flows so well.

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Lady DreamWriter chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
wow, made me cry, I know how this feels up to a point. thank you.
Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Nice and fast paced! Like it!_ your one of my favorites.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
I love the metaphors and imagery.
arcane devices chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
deep and nice use of metaphors. -ADD
The Rock Poet chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
This was a very touching piece of poetry! I enjoyed to know that ,though many are ignorant of World War II ,it is very pleasing to know that some of us still have our knowledge, and will never forget! The Rock Poet
RootbeerFloat chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
This, I believe, was one of your best and most touching works. I think it was COMPLETELY amazing. The way your words flow is amazing -almost like honey, you know? Well, if you dont, thats what your writing reminds me of. It flows and articulates and ensnares. I hope you have a wonderful day!