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Breaking Heart
chapter 1 .
7/8/2005
I agree. I think this poem is swell. Maybe the last line could've said "soon" instead of "yet", but then i dunno. very good job.
~irish lover
Emilie Aurel
chapter 1 .
6/27/2005
Wow, that was.. different. But nicely done, it was unique!