|Reviews for Comfort|
| backseats on thursdays chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
Loved the last two stanzas...
| sarah1491 chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
Oh... truly amazing & unique...
| Unholy Haven chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
I like the idea this holds, of wanting to experience everything that life has to offer, including the pain, in order to grow as a person.
I did find the first two lines a little bit awkward, just not a smooth read. I think this might be due to the frequent use of the word "it". Perhaps you could make a slight change here, but other than that, you've got a good piece of poetry here!
| Noir Fleurir chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
this is an interesting poem. good read:)
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
Superb and amorous. :)