Reviews for Entrance of the Dancer
Kira Deleria chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
Hi again. This is awsome. I like the feeling of importance that it's creating, even though for me when I think of dancing (or especially ballet) also tags along the memory of tripping...*bruises.* Nice work. To your review on Smile I re-did it. Tell me if it's still Hum... material? And thanks for the advice with thesauraus (hope I spelled that right *shifty eyed*) business on Leave Me Be. I'm going to re-do that one too and tell me if it's any better. Thanks for the advice, happy writing.
Rae chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
omigosh! i really liked it . . . i felt her weaving and dancing in the room with me . . . one suggestion though, the part about seeing what was in her minds eye seemed slightly awkward, you might want to rearrange the words, or set them up differently or w/e . . . it was really good though!
April Hammer chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
LOVE THISS! How do you do that? You've used such simple words and all that, yet you've made such a wonderful image and the words flow so nicely!