Reviews for Track Marks, And I Don't Mean High School Sports
really-chilly chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
lol sorry it sounds cliche but your poems leave me saying 'wow'. I found this poem intense and sad, but I like it because you wrote it very well.
HarleyQuin chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
powerful. i really appriciate your rhythm because i'm experimenting with the same thing. i really like short lines. i feel it gives something to the poem. keep up the good work.
lackluster chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
wow, this is a GOOD poem! i liked it. and secondly, your profile kinda creeped me out...in a good way...i think...you are really unique though, kind of mysterious. great job on this poem!
April Hammer chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
Ohh! This is SO GOOD! And it definitely scares me into staying away from drugs. Such good imagery... goodness! *golden star :D*
Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
The last 3 lines were really breath taking. Loved the poem as a whole too.
WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
You're poems just keep getting better! If that's even possible! But my favorite is still that other one...you know which one I'm talking about...hopefully.