Reviews for Freedom
DathomiranSciFiAuthor chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
Powerful haiku. Good job. :)
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
brilliant. this is pure unadultured genius.

~* noelle
Alas A. Nock chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
I wonder what my mother would say. first I know she'd massacre me...then we'd have to see.

And thank you sincerely for your review.
lackluster chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
this brought a smile to my face for the most peculiar reason...great work!

Sagaciouspnay chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
Oh this is sweet _- A nice request that even I agree too. Good job!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
sounds like my bf... nice job... love the title
arcane devices chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
powerful no doubt. -ADD
katmonkey chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Hey, that's a great haiku. Using just a few words it's really powerful.

Saeger chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
Sounds about right... Everybody wants to at some point or another. Sweet, gentle way of putting it, showing that you still are (at least partially) a child, but long to be on you own, to go your own way... Nice.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
Interesting way to a plea, but I like it.
blackbirdfly chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
wow! this haiku is amazing! whenever i wrte haikus my teachers say something like; Good try sweetie.

but this is fabulous!

thanks for reviewing my poem the only girl who can change the world- i didn't mean to put it in humor!


but the haikus excellent!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
Excellent haiku. So excellent. _ I absolutely love this haiku! It's so good! Write on!