Reviews for I Love What You Do To Me
ryan chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
hey...just a little confused here i your a virgin and you never done any of this...so are you able to write about it and how you like it when you never experinced yet...so...how do you know how it feels...i dont want to sound mean in any of the reiviews i send but i just try to tell whats on my mind...but this one doesnt seem like a poem at all...it just yu saying how much you like beinn touchd and rubd against...and that whole suck on your boob thing...that wa just a little perverted...i didnt see why that should be in there...but uhh...hey...i love your poems.,...just thats what i thought about it...sorry though...peace out meg.. ttyl
TheDevilsAngel09 chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
this piece is well writen and flows really well..this is a very emotional and erotic piece..well writen

Laura