|Reviews for Messages Never Sent|
| The Postscript chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
I like this and know how that feels to not open yourself up to someone, or someone not opening themselves up to you. But eventually, I suppose, the truth begins to peak through the cracks. This is a little vauge, though, and it's not really clear writing but a good start. Keep writing.
| Starflamer chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Not bad...but in some parts i couldn't make head or tail of it...maybe it's my fault, or maybe i just din't know how to understand your style of writing...