Reviews for generic landscape views
if sighing chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
"tie a ribbon around the something something something"

I love the third stanza, the whole thing was just er, rich, er, a tame ferocity.

yesyes, a tame ferocity (but not too)

exquisite
this is britt chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
really good- I'm sorry for my lack of reviews lately- but it was excellent. the red ribbons made me think of "Not the Red Baron."
smile persephone chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
'shoved under my fingernails are your postcards/with their scalloped edges and generic landscape views' Brilliance. The style works beautifully here and I just love it. Lovelylovely.
FFF5EE chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
this is such a unique poem. i like how vague or utterly stomping it is. i don't know if you understand what i mean by that but it reminds me of how i'm writing nowadays _