Anxiously awaiting next update...:)

we I like it! it's a shame u haven't updated in a while. I hope you will :-P I look forward to it!

A very interesting story that has great potential! _ I really like the characters, especially Calistine. Arlo's acting a bit more childish of late.. we'll see how the journey goes. Overall good story :D

This story is wonderful. I really like the different types of curses and such. The characters have a realistic attitude about life too. It's great.

Nice ending.

Make sure you read over your chapter before posting. I'll just point out the big mistakes here:

"I was one of those rich people, but I didn’t care much for socializing. I did, however, enjoy people watching."

"People watching" meant that Arlo enjoyed people watching him? I think you meant people-watching. It took me a while to figure out what you meant.

"She started to weep. Arlo immediately wrapped his arms around her.

“Who did this to you?” He whispered gently in her ear. She shivered from the sensation and answered quietly.

“I do not know.” Arlo let her go and handed her a handkerchief."

I think you meant for the whole story to be in first person.

Nice story. Update soon :)

-MS

This sounds 't wait for the !

very dramatic. i like the idea so far. at first when he says he's cursed with beauty, it almost seems narcistic, but after reading the entire intro, i get the feeling. i'd like to see where this is going. please update soon. 0)

ps. could you please read 'Tragic Traitor Tactics'? i'd appreciate your feedback.