Reviews for The Little Life
deadlyprincess chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
it was okay... not my fav.. but hey what do i know?
Blazer456 chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
Very beautiful!What is a haiku?
tiggershan87 chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
short but good
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
You must be doing the 5-3-5 scheme and then the last line is short one syllable. But the poem does have a strong theme.
liz anya chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
I like this. It shows how precious life is. The last line is kind of weird, though. By the way, the traditional haiku format follows a 5-7-5 syllable format.
ygg chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
The last line is kinda weird.. But it's nice though. Keep writing!
Chaloux chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
I like this poem alot, it takes you as far as a haiku can. It makes you think what else you would say if there were more words to the poem. it's very simple and very sincere. i think you did really well. nice work.
alligater20 chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
I love it! Okay, well I can't claim to be familiar at all with haiku, but this is great to my knowledge! I like the opposites of life and death in it. It's beautiful. Great work )
lackluster chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
surprisingly, it makes sense for me! i don't usually read haiku's either, cause i always feel like they're 'unfinished' but this was great! keep writing!
smile persephone chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
'died into death' is a completely redundant statement. Besides that, it reads awkwardly. Actually, this isn't even a haiku. A haiku has a syllable count of 5-7-5.