Reviews for Willow
batang makata chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
nice imagery. i felt the sadnessin your poem.
Amara the Warrior chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
This is a really good example of personification. Good job.
Dystorque chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
Oh, this is gorgeous! I love the sorrow that flows from it so copiously. This is my favorite sort of poem: natural wonders, strong emotion, and lots to think about even when you finish reading.
Ten of Clubs chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
thank you so much for your review of my "Hollow Wood". i appreciate it so much! and you were right about this poem. being a lover of nature, i find this hits very close to my heart. your imagery is very well done! i don't think it's amateurish at all, but it is hopefully sweet. i love the idea of the leaves being shaped like swords... i would have never thought of that.
April Hammer chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Aw! Poor willow! This was such a sweet, delicate-sounding poem, which is really appropriate, seeing the poor sad willow. Aw, I feel so bad for it, now. I'm going to give it a hug every time I see it now. .